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Opaque Sky

Did you fly too close to the sun? Did your wings ignite combust breathe air breathe ash? Did you circle the sea with feathers with flames with smoke? How free is it, to fly beneath the opaque sky?

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Date: 6/14/2016 6:03:00 PM
Naomi, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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