Ooze

…one foot sucked into a mud bog...that next step ~

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/24/2023 1:13:00 PM

We all get our foot stucked in the mud sonetimes...but thanks God we have two feet,so hopefully the other foot would help us take a step high and pull out of that mud..Very wise post..Arlo

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/6/2023 12:15:00 PM

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/25/2023 11:35:00 AM

Sometimes that foot is a tongue. Thanks, CC :-))

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/23/2023 6:25:00 PM

Yikes, Arlo, Iam sinking. I haven’t been on line much as far as commenting. Sorry.. Pangie….

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/23/2023 11:31:00 PM

Use your time for you, Pangie, our poems are posted for a long time. :o)

Joe Maverick

Date: 8/18/2023 4:47:00 PM

Which leg of the journey to choose? And will it still be with shoes? Would be Uppermost in my mind Arlo, enjoyed The quandry you portray; today '

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/18/2023 9:04:00 PM

A bit of a conundrum 2 b sur. How often are we sucked into our own mud? :o/

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/17/2023 7:29:00 PM

Stuck ! From my observation, there's no next step, unless someone offers to help. :) Just sayin'.

Arlo Parker
Date: 8/18/2023 1:09:00 PM

We need each other and we make a lot of missteps!! Thx 4 comments, BL.