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Oo Sense Offense

We’d gag as we whizzed through the town if someone rolled the window down. It was a most offensive smell and a persistent smog as well. Committees formed, complaints were made and rules and regulations laid upon the owners big oak desk, to obey rules or face the risk of paying a most hefty fine. I was glad that mill wasn’t mine. Miill closes down and cleanups start. Hundreds of folks wtih a sad heart. Wage-earners paid the massive price, but now the town smells very nice. Won a third place in odor contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/5/2012 6:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Susan's~ "Offensive Odors or Noise Pollution" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2012 3:05:00 AM
Very nice poem Joyce.Congrqts om your win.
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Date: 1/3/2012 10:05:00 PM
yes!.. love the style , joyce.. smiling cheesr for the big win!..:) huggs!
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Date: 12/29/2011 8:33:00 PM
good one!
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Date: 12/29/2011 2:15:00 PM
Sad that it closed down but at least the smell is gone!~Tirzah~
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Date: 12/29/2011 1:56:00 PM
Love it.
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Date: 12/29/2011 1:44:00 PM
It must be a breath of fresh air for everyone! Very descriptive write, Joyce. Thanks for your kind comments. Hope you had a wonderful Xmas xx
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Date: 12/29/2011 1:37:00 PM
I am suddenly reminded of a nearby town that I sure dislike riding through because of the awful smell from a nearby factory. You describe this well. Well done !!!
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