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Oo - All In One Stinking Week

It's not impossible that my house stink. At times there festers garbage in a sack behind a closet door, and once the sink got clogged with who-knows-what; sent water back up filthy and all black; I dished it out scoop by nasty scoop into a pan. That damn disposal broke. There was no doubt my kitchen reeked, so I turned on a fan and dropped some baking soda in the drain (I'd heard it stopped most odors), but the worst came next: a stench which I could not explain. I searched my rooms. Six days my house was cursed until I found it dead and hidden well - a mouse I bet inhaled the kitchen's smell! (true story but a little exaggerated!) For Susan Burch's Offensive Odors or Noise Pollution Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/21/2020 9:56:00 PM
After I read to the end I realized that "OO" in the title must have stood for Offensive Odors, but I couldn't help but think "OO, who stepped in dog poop?" This one was both funny and sad; sad because it was a true story but funny how you ended it with the conclusion that the mouse died from the stink of the clogged drain! Very entertaining. You really DO write sonnets about every conceivable subject!
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Date: 1/30/2012 5:08:00 AM
Hmmm....about those results....Let it be a secret.
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Date: 1/5/2012 4:40:00 PM
Oh I had a possum die in my furnace vent. Eight hundred dollars later, I was rid of the smell Great poem Andrea and congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/5/2012 10:05:00 AM
Quite a story is this, i would love to have seen your face, in this stinking week of yours, anyway it gave way to you as usual penning an awesome account, and in Sonnet form too. a masterpiece. congrats harry
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Date: 1/5/2012 6:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~Susan's~ "Offensive Odors or Noise Pollution" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/4/2012 11:12:00 AM
ohh myyy !! Good poem and Congrats !!
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Date: 1/4/2012 8:32:00 AM
A great story Andrea. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/4/2012 2:26:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your 1st place win.Loved it first time around.
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Date: 1/3/2012 9:31:00 PM
Andrea, excellent write and a well deserved win, congratulations, all the best, Greg
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Date: 1/3/2012 9:18:00 PM
this so sooo graphic is a beautiful way, andie... wow, congrats on the top win.. i like! :) huggs!
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Date: 1/2/2012 6:46:00 PM
glad to see this was your poem - had no idea when judging. results are out if you look in your member area. for some reason they didn't post. hopefully PS will fix it soon. congrats on your #1 win, yes, first place. hooray!!!
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Date: 12/27/2011 11:48:00 AM
Had me laughing with this one. When we had that mouse in the house and it died in a vent I can tell you that smell was totally unpleasant. It is definitely offensive to the nose. ha ha . love phyl
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Date: 12/19/2011 11:06:00 PM
It is a good thing I did not eat before I read this! Good writing and rhyming.
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Date: 12/15/2011 7:41:00 PM
Oohoo! Sounds like something that could happen to me. I wrote one once called Murphy's Law Strikes Again. Think I'll repost it for you and we can feel sorry for each other. God Bless and Merry Christmas, JB ;)
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Date: 12/15/2011 12:21:00 PM
Just what is that awful smell? It's as if the fumes are coming straight from hell. That secret scent that hides so well. And then one day the air is as clear as a bell.
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Date: 12/15/2011 11:34:00 AM
I loved reading this one. Been there done that you might say.
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Date: 12/14/2011 11:12:00 PM
Andrea, I do not know how the little mouse may have died. i do know that after a few days a dead mouse stinks. Chef has 9 cats and they like moles and mice. once in a while they bring it in the house and do not tell anyone and do not eat it. Pretty stinky. if I reply to a comment does it go to you or do you have to read the poem again to see it. I sent one to you. HG told me that once anyone comments on a poem, you will not get another unless you win contest or featured read your older poems
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Date: 12/14/2011 9:05:00 PM
LOL! This is really good, Andrea. I just read Carolyn's and I tell ya, if I were Susan I would have a tough time judging this contest! Yes, I know it's been a while, Andrea. Been much too busy... but have a little break so here I am ....for awhile. Hope all is well! Merry Christmas to you ! Love, Annalise
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Date: 12/14/2011 3:11:00 PM
Great work that reads like a winner for sure..Those mice or field rats can leave enough scent to have been an elephant..Well maybe...Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 12/14/2011 12:55:00 PM
Oh wow, that write is quite hilarious Andrea! I really enjoyed the part where the mouse died, from the smell of the kitchen!! Yes, something similar happened to me...no dead mice but a definite stench throughout the house. I don't know anyone who likes that smell!! I really enjoyed your poem this afternoon, Awesome Work!!
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Date: 12/14/2011 12:56:00 PM
You'll do well in Susan's contest!
Date: 12/14/2011 12:45:00 PM
LOL I've had similar experiences with that goop that clogs up sinks and tubs. "Nasty" is too mild a word to describe it. Got a great kick from your last line. Poor little mouse! Best wishes in Susan's contest. Witty work! Love and blessings for a merry Christmas, Carolyn
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Date: 12/14/2011 10:41:00 AM
Wishing you glad tiding for the upcoming Holiday Season Andrea. It is the time of year to reach out to old friends and new friends as well. As the old year ends and the New Year arrives I wish blessings to you and yours always. May you be blessed with inspiration and see your writing endeavors cascade upward in 2012. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/14/2011 9:16:00 AM
Eeew - sorry, Andrea, but I couldn't help laughing!
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Date: 12/14/2011 8:07:00 AM
Good morning Andrea, , how are you this lovely morniing? Me so & so... but hanging in there like a dead mistletoe... lol... anyways... a very nice entry for the contest... i hate dead mouse...lol.. good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 12/14/2011 12:42:00 AM
Andrea ha ha ha love this, you have given me an idea for another poem... just having fun with Nikko's contest, might wait till others have posted then steal an odd word and re-arrange ha ha ha, have a great Christmas holiday..love David
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