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Onslaught

The rain has stopped But I am saddened by the sudden,brilliant onslaught of sunshine, Although the apple trees,drenched and dripping In the steaming orchard, Glisten in almost painful beauty. The rain was comforting while it lasted It suited my gray mood, For I was caught up in reveries of blue yesterdays And I traveled into the nether lands of despair Where regret and sorrow dwell. But now the sun touches every corner of the landscape, Banishes melancholy And will not be cast aside. Gold dances on the perimeter of darkness And hope most sweetly is restored.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/29/2009 12:01:00 PM
Frank, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/27/2009 12:27:00 PM
nicley penned, cngrats on being a featured artist.
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Date: 9/25/2009 4:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 9/25/2009 3:09:00 PM
Just dropping by to add---Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 2:46:00 PM
beautiful....my favorite this week ! It paints a lovely picture. Congratulations !
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Date: 9/24/2009 2:32:00 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:43:00 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 11:52:00 AM
Frank, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Frank. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2009 6:38:00 AM
Vivid images paint this inspirational poem of hope. Congatulations on this well derserved feature of the week. dear Frank. Lainie
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Date: 9/24/2009 4:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Frank. Love, Carol
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