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You were my raindrop and I was your cloud… We spoke in whispers that were heard out aloud… I was your teardrop and you were my eyes… You saw in colors my dreams pass by… You were my hands and I was your grasp… We felt our way through the dark and over the past… You were the letters and I was the word… We rhymed our way across the sky like wings of a bird… Together we sleep under rain that has passed… Holding each other in a love that will last…

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Date: 2/3/2013 4:24:00 PM
There is so much love behind the words, romantic, and so sweet...
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Date: 1/31/2013 8:52:00 AM
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Date: 1/26/2013 8:56:00 PM
Wow. I like this one. good write - JH
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Date: 1/26/2013 7:33:00 AM
Oh, wow. SO sweet! I'm so glad to see you're back and writing :)
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Date: 1/25/2013 10:02:00 PM
Michael; This is good. I tried singing it out and guess what - it sounded good. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 1/24/2013 4:33:00 AM
Michael, I really touched by this piece, and straight to my fave list :D you fly my imaginations through a beautiful romantism, great penned Michael :) - hug, yanny
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Date: 1/22/2013 12:56:00 PM
Ahhh!!Sooo!! Romantic..That is the way that true love should be..I am glad that I chose this one to read today...Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were uplifting..Sara
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Date: 1/22/2013 12:58:00 PM
I am going to add this one to my favs..I may print it out and do one as a response..Sara
Date: 1/22/2013 7:39:00 AM
Michael romance just oozes from this, it is dripping down my screen , well done buddy...David
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Date: 1/22/2013 5:50:00 AM
Now this defines the word ROMANTIC!!! An excellent write, Michael my friend... kudos!
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Date: 1/21/2013 9:21:00 PM
feel so nice and comfort with you lovely romantic write dear poet Michael...enjoyed so much the imagery...:) luv Sk
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Date: 1/21/2013 3:22:00 PM
Always the romantic i so enjoyed your metaphor! Light & Love
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Date: 1/21/2013 2:25:00 PM
just beautiful!
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Date: 1/21/2013 1:33:00 PM
This is an incredible and wondrous write my friend! I sincerely loved reading this amazing and fantastic poem this afternoon! You have been writing some awesome poems lately, some really spectacular pieces, Michael! I will have an entry into your contest soon my friend, it just takes time sometimes coming up with the better writes! Excellent Work!!
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Date: 1/21/2013 1:28:00 PM
lovely poem sweet write
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