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Only In a Different Life Premiere Contest Winner

Looking through the window of a shop, I see you with a woman. She lifts long auburn hair while you, who stand behind her, are fastening a strand of pearls around her slender neck. I close my eyes envisioning. . . I've opened them to you facing me, and I'm the woman with the red-brown locks! You touch my cheek, and in your eyes I read an urgent need. You lead me to the door, around the corner to an empty alley. Our bodies press together. In the chill of night, I taste warm, wild kisses on my mouth. "Darling, my darling," escapes my lips, then suddenly my reverie is broken. . . . A passerby has stopped to place a dollar in my cup. Murmuring my thanks, I gaze once more into the store where diamond rings and necklaces glitter like new snow beneath a winter moon. The man whom I could know only in a different life, who stands inside the store where I could never go, takes his sweetheart's hand and leads her past me pretending not to see a common homeless woman who yearns for so much more than mere necessities. For the Seeker's Being Homeless Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/2/2021 11:15:00 AM
You write as a poet but have the eye of a novelist....
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/2/2021 1:20:00 PM
thanks. Sadly, I do not have that "extra" thing that makes for the current type of free verse that is so popular.
Date: 9/17/2019 9:56:00 PM
Correct me if I am wrong but this is your 4th poem on soup and a winner! Amazing talent you have!!
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Date: 10/30/2017 7:36:00 AM
My imagination I did start to stretch; If kind friend one day I could fetch; Sat for spell; Sad could tell; Wrote poems while she was a wretch.
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Date: 10/26/2017 7:48:00 AM
You're a sensitive person, being able to feel what homeless feels like.
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Date: 10/30/2016 8:21:00 PM
Beautifully written congratulations!
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Date: 10/30/2016 1:19:00 AM
A well-deserved win, Andrea. Congrats!
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Date: 10/28/2016 9:35:00 PM
Very well done Andre, we've probably all had these thoughts in our own way. Congratulations...
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Date: 10/28/2016 7:12:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on a well-deserved First Place Trophy win for your amazing insight into the emotional pain of the homeless we seldom think about. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/27/2016 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Andrea. What a moving poem. I love the last two lines; this is something we often forget when thinking about the homeless - it is about so much more than food and shelter. Agnes
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Date: 10/27/2016 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your top win! I could imagine the whole picture...well narrated.
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Date: 10/27/2016 9:18:00 AM
You could shoot an oscar worthy movie with just a pen and a piece of paper.
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Date: 10/27/2016 8:50:00 AM
Hi Andrea, I enjoyed your approach, it was so realistic and so sad. Congratulations on your top win it was well deserved: -)Alexis
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Date: 10/27/2016 7:48:00 AM
Beautiful narration and amazing story, Andrea. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/27/2016 1:57:00 AM
Exceptional write Andrea I love the story you told oh so heartbreak lyrics sad:-( congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/27/2016 12:41:00 AM
I know the feeling...congratulations, Andrea. Great poem. Carole
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Date: 10/27/2016 12:21:00 AM
Oh, this one is beautiful, Andrea:) congratulations on your well deserved win:)
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Date: 10/26/2016 11:25:00 PM
I really like your approach t the contest. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 10/26/2016 10:59:00 PM
This is so wonderful, full of longing. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/26/2016 9:49:00 PM
how painful is this scene, andie... big congrats on your top award!..huggs
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Date: 10/26/2016 7:47:00 PM
Congrats on your top win Andrea
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Date: 10/26/2016 7:34:00 PM
Beautifully written, Andrea! Congrats to you!
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Date: 10/26/2016 7:29:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea, enjoyed this one. Well done :)
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Date: 10/26/2016 6:08:00 PM
Amazing Andrea, BIG CONGRATS!
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Date: 8/13/2015 1:40:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Andrea! Great story teller u r dear!
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Date: 8/13/2015 1:38:00 AM
touching win... Andrea...... SKAT
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