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Only If They Rhyme

“You write, I see, exclusively in rhyme,” the patron said…“doesn’t prose appeal to you?” she quizzed the noted bard. “Prose is fine,” the man replied, “but here is why I do --- writing metered rhyme - for me - is relatively hard!” Turning out a piece of prose has never been a challenge, and laying out the concepts of my themes takes little time When off’ring them - haphazardly - while many focused hours are needed virtually every time I try the same - in rhyme. You’ll find, in my portfolio, two quarters of my work is simply aimed at making those who read my poems laugh... While those I view as - ‘meaningful’ - exposing and defining what our lives are all about - comprise the other half. But I’ll not try convincing you to alter your technique - assuming you’re a ‘proser’ - but I’ve noticed...over time... 98% of those I’ve asked, “Do you like poems?” have stated - firmly - “Yes...I do...but only if they rhyme!”

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Date: 3/24/2022 2:02:00 PM
I enjoyed your rhyme (er, poem) and have found myself at times criticized for both rhyming and not rhyming. But, each would-be poet/writer must (I'd suppose) find his own voice/preferred mode of expression. Thanks for posting.
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Mark Stellinga
Date: 3/25/2022 6:06:00 AM
Hi Leo, Most often its the unaccomplished academic poets who discourage rhyme. Virtually ALL my listeners greatly favor it. I do appreciate prose, but it's just way too easy to whip it up. Some of my pieces take as long as a month to satisfy ME! :) Best, Mark

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