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Only If Love Could See

Only if love see Of everything beautiful and pure Of everything natural and raw Of every destiny that is to be Of every love that could be so true Of everything that could be so sudden Out of all, our love stood But with love so true comes death so cruel Only if our love wasn’t as blind as the bat Only if it wasn’t as real as the cloud Only if it wasn’t as deep as the ocean Alas! ONLY IF LOVE COULD SEE Remembering our shared memories envelope me in sorrow so deep the valley between my sweet sensations your heart find solace just as my soul gently listen to your sweet heartbeats The pathway to paradise we have both trend in the sweetness of our sweat Alas! ONLY IF LOVE COULD SEE Truly love comes with its sacrifice some shallow we can scale through others so deep it drowns us ...and it drowned the one my heartbeats for Alas! ONLY IF LOVE COULD SEE and I would have seen the future through it. ___________________________________________________ September 20, 2016. Movie: TITANIC Contest name, MOVIE MANIA Sponsor, NICOLA BRYNE

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Date: 9/20/2016 4:55:00 PM
You penned this gem so eloquent my friend. I love the way you heighten your the feeling of agony within. Excellent poem. Good luck in the contest. Much love.............A.M.
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 9/21/2016 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Afolabi, and you are welcome here at anytime.
Date: 9/20/2016 9:37:00 AM
Well done with this poem also x Wendy
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 9/21/2016 8:03:00 AM
Thanks alot Wendy, your comment is so much appreciated.
Date: 9/20/2016 8:52:00 AM
Great poem, Abosede. Great movie too! If love could see then we would never take that chance. Good luck!
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Abosede Ogundare
Date: 9/20/2016 9:36:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, for your kind words of encouragement.

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