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Only If and If Only

If only and only if i was the moon I would be the fullest moon Brightening up your darkest nights If only and only if i was the wind I would blow love your way non stop Westerlies to the easterlies Northerlies to the southerlies If only and only if i was the rain I would forever shower you with love Washing away all sadness Like the desert needs the rain I would be the oasis if only And only if

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Date: 11/17/2015 10:33:00 PM
Ayanda, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Ayanda Ndaba
Date: 11/18/2015 1:31:00 AM
Thank you Skat...it is highly appreciated!
Date: 11/17/2015 3:39:00 AM
wow..beautiful poem :)
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Ayanda Ndaba
Date: 11/18/2015 1:32:00 AM
As they say , beauty is in the eye of the beholder...Thank you!
Date: 11/16/2015 10:44:00 AM
I love this touching declaration of love. Inventive and well written. Congrats. daver
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Ayanda Ndaba
Date: 11/18/2015 1:29:00 AM
Daver love is a gift that should be cherished by all and experienced by all , it is a choice to be sad or unhappy for , no one is in control of ones' feelings but one! Thank you.
Date: 11/3/2015 12:35:00 AM
Beautiful use of imagery and I quite like the structure. Very moving piece of writing, Ayanda :-)
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Ayanda Ndaba
Date: 11/3/2015 11:17:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 11/1/2015 3:17:00 PM
Ayanda, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Ayanda Ndaba
Date: 11/2/2015 6:20:00 AM
Thank you Linda i sure trust i will enjoy the Poetry Soup...

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