Only For You

Only for you L,O,V,E these four letters as they are lying side by side in my heart for years, but you never bothered to care. ;) © kash poet ================000============= Placement: 4th; (Nov.2012) Contest: For,Four,Fore...... Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi ================000==============

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James Fraser

Date: 1/13/2013 10:16:00 AM

A short piece that many a person could or has related to. Nice one Kash, and belated congratulations on your placement. Have a lovely Sunday :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2012 11:59:00 AM

Sorry so late but I am here now to say congratulations on your win in this contest Kash. Love, Carol

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 11/29/2012 12:43:00 AM

Beautiful!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 11/25/2012 9:15:00 AM

Wonderful and nice piece,Kash..Congrats on your win..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2012 9:24:00 PM

hi, again, Kash. I had a really nice thanksgiving. How is it going where you are?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/23/2012 6:00:00 PM

Kash, congratulations with your win in Debbie's contest~ PD

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 11/23/2012 6:44:00 AM

nice poem friend Kash..congratulations!!

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 11/23/2012 5:44:00 AM

Well penned Kash albeit sad. Congrats on your win!

Joseph May

Date: 11/23/2012 5:39:00 AM

congrats on your win Kash

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/23/2012 3:22:00 AM

Big congratulations Kash another beauty xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/22/2012 1:28:00 PM

okay, i'm sold on this kind of love, kashi bud.. what's new?.. thanks and miss ya!... ringgg, ringg!..:) huggs!

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/22/2012 11:42:00 AM

Beautifully spoken, melancholy and sad...love this. ...i love your tenderness with every poem you pen.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2012 7:53:00 AM

Kash, how is it going? I sure miss coming here daily to see poems. It's been very busy at my house and my son and his wife came last night, so I am up a little early before everyone else. Wish me luck to catch up here today! It will be another busy day cooking and I look forward to seeing my daughter's family with all of us here today. LUv, Andrea

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/22/2012 12:31:00 AM

Geeee that ending :).soooooo saaad..yet sad verses make the best poetry..i guess... bravo.

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 11/21/2012 6:07:00 PM

nice penned Kash! :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/20/2012 7:36:00 PM

kashi !... i want more, lol.. how are you?... visit my neighborhood!.. miss ya!..:) huggs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2012 2:51:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..It is an attention getter..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2012 10:29:00 PM

A sad one but well penned, Kashinath!

Joseph May

Date: 11/19/2012 7:46:00 PM

nice write Kash ....best wishes

Andrea Travis

Date: 11/19/2012 3:46:00 PM

Awesome! I totally relate! Excellent as always!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/19/2012 3:42:00 PM

aw, so sad at the end! great poem...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/19/2012 11:52:00 AM

awhh, so painfully beautiful, kashi bud... was out this weekend, arggh!.. come visit!..) hugggs

David Williams

Date: 11/19/2012 11:36:00 AM

Kash, last line is like a sledge hammer...David

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/19/2012 11:27:00 AM

yikes..the last line is so unexpected!! Good one Kash Happy Holiday. Light & Love

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/19/2012 10:59:00 AM

Glad it's not your story my friend, this is a truly stimulating and wondrous write! I really enjoyed reading this unique and tremendous poem this afternoon! What a lovely and sad piece, Great Work!!