Only You

Before the world began Before the apple fell from the tree It was always you with me A million years before man walked the earth Before I could see It was always you with me When I close my eyes Only you do I see The truth never lies It was always you with me

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/27/2014 11:12:00 PM

Congratulations on the fine win with this lovely write, richard

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2014 2:50:00 PM

Richard, nice win...PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/25/2013 11:36:00 PM

Richard, Congratulations :-) for your nice win.... Thank you for considering my contest. Good Night ~ Linda ~

Richard Ferry
Date: 11/25/2013 11:38:00 PM

My pleasure

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/29/2013 12:22:00 PM

Way to go, Richard. Nice going. Congrats. Ralph

Richard Ferry
Date: 10/10/2013 10:48:00 PM

Thanks

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2013 11:26:00 PM

this poem is filled with love. I really like it. Congrats in the contest, Richard.

Richard Ferry
Date: 10/10/2013 10:47:00 PM

Thanks Andrea Not much time lately to write for Soup..

Skat A

Date: 9/28/2013 2:40:00 PM

Richard, love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~

Shanity Rain

Date: 9/28/2013 11:56:00 AM

Ohh Beautiful. The truth never lies !! Excellent ~ Congratulations , less said ~ amazing write.

Richard Ferry
Date: 10/10/2013 10:48:00 PM

Thanks

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/28/2013 5:31:00 AM

Congrats on the win in the contest, Richard

Richard Ferry
Date: 10/27/2013 2:04:00 PM

thanks

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/27/2013 7:49:00 PM

Richard, , Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA

Richard Ferry
Date: 10/10/2013 10:49:00 PM

Thanks Linda..

David Williams

Date: 2/27/2013 1:04:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...David

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/26/2013 12:24:00 PM

Nice write, Richard! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Richard Ferry
Date: 10/10/2013 10:50:00 PM

Thanks Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2013 3:14:00 AM

A very good poem to send to the contest and you won! - Congratulations! - Have a lovely new week! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Ferry

Date: 2/24/2013 10:15:00 PM

Thanks I`m new to this..Not entirely sure what glory means. Hopefully you can enlighten me..Appreciate your support Linda..............Rick

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/24/2013 9:27:00 PM

Hello Richard, , , thank you for SUPPORTING MY NEWEST contest...CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win ;-) LINDA soup mail....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/8/2013 2:06:00 PM

Richard :-) your poem has been a wonderful write to find on the soups front page... '"Congratulations"" with your awesome featured poem of the week... always~ LINDA

Richard Ferry
Date: 1/8/2013 10:52:00 PM

I am new to this world and appreciate all the help I can get. Especially, positive comments. Thank you Linda Rick