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Only 5 Days

Only 5 days since our last kiss Only 5 days since I looked in your eyes Only 5 days and it is so hard to believe it is 5 days, when it feels like 5 months. Only 5 days, but I still feel your arms around my body, holding me tight Only 5 days, but your kisses still burn all of the places you kissed me. Only 5 days ... just 5 mornings and 5 nights ...

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Paul Callus

Date: 6/8/2016 12:10:00 PM

Very expressive and impactful repetition; you sure are missing somebody close to your heart! Hope your next date is not that far away:) // paul

A Moment Like This
Date: 6/8/2016 12:39:00 PM

Thank you for the kind comment, Paul! There is no next date ... but my heart certainly is missing something! Something that most likely exist only in my dreams and in the poetry that I love so much!

James Inman

Date: 6/5/2016 9:05:00 AM

Counting the days, you have represented feelings of sweet longing well in this poem.

A Moment Like This
Date: 6/5/2016 8:50:00 PM

Thank you for the nice comment, James!