Onisms of Despair

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Chionophile any small animal that thrives in winter conditions especially one that thrives in snow..

Like a small chionophile Trapped in the Sahara Desert Onisms of despair flood awhile

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Date: 1/15/2017 9:32:00 AM

sad but very clever write, my friend - have never come across this form before & had to look up the word onism

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/28/2017 5:24:00 AM

Jack, glad that you looked up the word onism..Now you have a new word at your disposal to use to shock people..LOL..Sara

Date: 1/15/2017 9:29:00 AM

That would do it, Mrs Sara. I learned something today:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/28/2017 5:16:00 AM

Glad that I had a vocabulary lesson here..It is good to learn some new words..LOL..Sara

Date: 1/15/2017 8:34:00 AM

OK, SARA, a very interesting vocabulary lesson encased in a beautifully written, thought provoking poetic dash. Love it!!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/15/2017 9:04:00 AM

John, Thanks for the excellent review..I appreciate you stopping by and taking time to comment..Sara