Ones Wish

My eyes espied my heart did shout, to find the courage to ask her out. .

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/25/2014 6:06:00 PM

go for it!!! asking is door to possible beginnings. :)!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/26/2014 5:00:00 PM

I pray that may God bless your plans James.. and that a long while happiness will always be upon you.. :) and much more poems for us to read and treasure from you.. :)!

James Fraser
Date: 11/26/2014 12:50:00 PM

I shall Olive, 2015 is the door to possible beginnings, James :)xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/25/2014 3:40:00 PM

Ohh, prince... she will oblige;wonderful!... huggs

James Fraser
Date: 11/25/2014 3:49:00 PM

Thank you Princess Nette. My first bite at Crystalline. Need to get braver, just like the question ;-) James hugs xx

Jan Allison

Date: 11/25/2014 3:21:00 PM

oh James I hope she said YES YES YES! Hugs jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/25/2014 3:28:00 PM

Aww James - writing like you do will melt any ladies heart:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser
Date: 11/25/2014 3:25:00 PM

If only Jan, need to have a word with my over imaginative mind, James :) xx

David Meade

Date: 11/25/2014 3:18:00 PM

Awesome . . . did she say yes?

James Fraser
Date: 11/25/2014 3:23:00 PM

Need to find her first David, but thank you for thinking of me. I was pondering today about trying new forms, and I happened to be looking at an older poem and came up with this. Thanks kindly for your visit. If I find her and ask her, I'll let you know, James :)