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One's First Love 2k11

No Fairies, no Genies, nor wishing-well. Sorcerer's duplicate not first love's spell. No Time-Machine to moments of one's yen; Ah, bathe in love for one's first time again! With memories one sips Fountain-of-Youth; Transporting back one where love first proved truth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/13/2011 10:30:00 AM
Nice job here my friend. A good write. I enjoyed this a lot. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:33:00 PM
Thanks to all of the poets whom have taken the time to read this Haiku here. A fellow poet, - Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.
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Anthony O. Mitchell Jr.
Date: 6/14/2011 1:04:00 AM
Most of my light poetry entries will be changed into either Quatrains or Couplet form works.
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Date: 6/4/2011 2:23:00 AM
Sorry, this is not a Haiku true to form. Though what it is simply a thought of my simple imagination. - Anthony Owen Mitchell Jr.
Date: 5/22/2011 6:12:00 PM
Awesome and intriguing thought, Anthony
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