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One With Thee

Tis I who pen these words for thee Upon parchment with my quill For I do wish my maiden to see The depth of my love and will T’was a blessing on that day His lance did pierce my side Thy stole every word I had to say With beauty thou cannot hide As thou nursed me back to health With thy tender loving way A lonely man gained true wealth As thy knelt with me to pray On this day I so proudly decree Tis my honor to be one with thee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/16/2008 12:32:00 PM
a beautiful and warm piece of poetry that you do so well.
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Date: 12/11/2008 3:26:00 PM
I liked the poem...anna
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Date: 12/9/2008 3:52:00 PM
Lovely poem with an uplifting message. Nice use of rhyme to convey your thoughts. Happy Holidays and God bless! Karen
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Date: 12/8/2008 3:58:00 AM
hey dude nice stuff man!
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Date: 12/7/2008 11:52:00 PM
Thank yo Michael for your kind words.Rgds Brian
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Date: 12/7/2008 7:23:00 AM
Just beautiful Michael.Keep the faith.
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Date: 12/7/2008 5:37:00 AM
This is really beautiful, Michael, Iin both structure and sentiment. Awesome write. My love to you and yours. Love Robin
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Date: 12/6/2008 2:25:00 PM
a beautiful poem from a talented man... thank you for your comment on my poem.."Grannie Angel".. and you know that bright shining light.. that lit your grandmothers eyes.. she shines it down on you .. from heaven.. it is never too late... to tell her how you feel.. write it Michael...Constance
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Date: 12/6/2008 1:02:00 PM
like the style of this poem, it reminds of the shakesprian era and i hope i spelled it right, the poem morning of babylon was not a message but a simple poem. Its my favorite book in the bible, and it relates to us more than anyone will ever know. this poems different and full of passion.
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Date: 12/6/2008 12:51:00 PM
Michael this is beautiful. Your heart speak's a love so special for yourwife. She is a very special woman to have you and you her. I pray someday that I might have what you have in your beloved wife. You are a very fortunate man to have that special love. I pray you and Toni and Michaela and Sarah and your son have peace and love through the holiday's. I pray for your health and your loving heart as well. You are a very special man Michael. I respect you and I I truely care for my Christian
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Date: 12/6/2008 9:35:00 AM
Michael this is so beautiful and so very romantic. Wonderful sonnet :) Thanks for your comments as always. ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/6/2008 7:43:00 AM
Astoundingly tender writing Michael.One of your best.& one for my favourites listing.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 12/6/2008 6:50:00 AM
If this is for Kristin's contest, Michael...it is a beautiful and very successful contender!! A tribute to your lovely maiden, as well as a lovely poem! ~ Carrie....ps. when I drive down the Esplanade, I will think about that big white house!!:)
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Date: 12/6/2008 5:46:00 AM
Michael, I noticed your comment on Michaela's poem just now - YAY!!! So happy for you! Congrats on good health! This poem is completely awesome and I hope you are entering it. Love you always, Shar xoxo
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Date: 12/6/2008 3:48:00 AM
To hear one say, "I love the Lord" is beautiful.....this write is beautiful....Always, Christy
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Date: 12/6/2008 3:34:00 AM
"What A Beautifully Written Song of 'Faith'~Beautiful & Blessed Michael Jordan!"~I truly doubt, that 'anyone' could written a more heart-felt & sincere account of their moment of salvation!~And also, "Tis the time and the glorious season, to recognize, exhault and lift, 'His Holy Name!'"~And it seems as if you did, within a thankful and sincere heart!~"Angels Smile Upon Such, I Believe!"~"My Love Always, To You & All You Love, John!"~"Happy Holidays Brother!"
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