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One With the Rainbow

Waist deep in an icy clear blue mountain lake Under the watchful gaze of the Grand Tetons majestic grandeur Snow peaked summits reaching clouds where they join the rising sun A more beautiful place I could never have imagined, even in my dreams Casting sunflower yellow line patiently over and over As the icy blue drops of water race back down the line so gracefully As though they can't wait to return to the secrets below The rhythmic snapping of the rod echoing in the still quiet morning My fly floats by the place among the crevasses of rocks where rainbows hide Beneath the icy clean blue water Here we are you and I, sharing this place, eye to eye Watching you dart from side to side, every color of the rainbow Reflecting, bending, gliding A rainbow in motion, here right beside me, all around me You jump as though proudly displaying your beauty As I gently hold your rainbow magic in my hand, thanking you for a perfect day I leave you to return to that hidden place where rainbows stay ©Donna Jones

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Date: 9/20/2013 8:53:00 PM
hey.....I live in Idaho......not far from the Tetons. They have a funny meaning in French. Poems about fishing I could read all day. This was a great one.
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Date: 3/21/2013 12:05:00 PM
I joined you casting your fly into the cold waters and observing the mountains..It made my heart soar and want to travel to see the beauty of mid-north-west of this great country..The fruit bearing pears are blooming and putting on leaves as are the Bradford Pears..Spring has come in fits and starts this year..I have enjoyed and been disappointed at the same time..Sara
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Date: 3/21/2013 2:03:00 PM
It is really fun...I fish all ways....though..except i have never had the pleasure of fishing in the ocean..you should see the Grand Tetons.....blessings Donna
Date: 3/20/2013 3:18:00 PM
Idyllic setting, Donna. And Beautifully written. Congratulations on your win. And thankyou for your own comment. - Red
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Date: 3/20/2013 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Red..and you are most welcome...:-)
Date: 3/19/2013 11:37:00 PM
Dear Donna, I just sent YOU a Soup Mail and I just saw YOUR name as number 3 on the Community Builders List So Part of the SOUP MAIL may seem a bit odd. Tomorrow I will read more of YOUR POEMS to get to know YOU so next time I write a SOUP MAIL there will be some knowledge in it. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 3/20/2013 9:15:00 AM
Well thank you harry....will be looking forward to getting..to know you...and vise versa ...Donna
Date: 3/19/2013 10:45:00 PM
Dear Donna, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations on YOUR Winning POEM "One With The Rainbow" in Dan Kearley's contest "One of Your Greatest days" You have captured this reader, I live in a Cabin on top of a mountain in Vermont with a lake 500 feet away; Loaded with (Natural Brown) Trout. If I may, so far away, join YOU in YOUR Greatest DAY. I also Fly fish. A very well deserved Win. Superb Pen. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 3/20/2013 9:21:00 AM
Hi harry...boy do I envy you...I live in the middle of Oklahoma..I love it but have to travel to use my fly rod. I do so enjoy it...but fish the regular way around here all the time...there is something so special about being in the water with the fish. I guess I am part fish! Thanks for writing.....blessings to you and yours!
Date: 3/19/2013 10:17:00 PM
Hi Donna, stopping by this poem again, just beautiful, what a lovely way and day! Congratulations with your amazing poem, always~ LINDA
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Date: 3/20/2013 9:22:00 AM
Thanks Linda...means a lot...especially from you...Donna
Date: 3/19/2013 5:09:00 PM
Donna, thank you for the good feeling poem... I need a few of these rainbows in my pocket...love the reflection around you...xox~ LINDA
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Date: 3/19/2013 9:42:00 PM
Well come rainbow trout fishing with me and feel the magic.....thanks for stopping PD always..Donna
Date: 3/17/2013 12:23:00 PM
This is also simply beautiful, Donna...it sounds like fly fishing!? The imagery is exquisitely pretty....thanks for the journey this cold, drab day. : ) Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/17/2013 12:36:00 PM
Yes, fly fishing and its great...thanks for stopping and the kind words..Donna
Date: 3/17/2013 10:03:00 AM
Lovely poem of what appears to be a passion of yours.
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Date: 3/17/2013 12:37:00 PM
Thank you, and yes I love it......:-)
Date: 3/17/2013 8:38:00 AM
AMAZING dear Donna... a real keeper for sure! If you don't win, there should be an investigation! Loved it and you! xoxoxox
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Date: 3/17/2013 12:38:00 PM
Thanks Jack.....but the fun is in the fishing haha or trying......Donna
Date: 3/17/2013 6:12:00 AM
Excellent write. Well described poem. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 3/17/2013 12:41:00 PM
Thanks Ravi :-)
Date: 3/17/2013 12:41:00 AM
donna, this is simply magnificent. So unique. A FAVE
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Date: 3/17/2013 12:42:00 PM
What an honor Andrea ....thanks.....you should try fly fishing sometime ..its awesome..Donna
Date: 3/16/2013 6:09:00 PM
Sounds Glorious, you could be describing Beautiful British Columbia the place I now call home.
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Date: 3/16/2013 9:31:00 PM
Hey Richard, the Grand Tetons are beautiful, and I had a..wonderful time. I wish I knew how to add a picture to go with this poem I took. Thanks for reading...Donna
Date: 3/16/2013 12:51:00 PM
Great anecdote about fishing Donna, beautifully portraid, reminds me of a day with an exotic oriental beauty I took to see a Salomn run, for the first time in her life and how a Salomn let her caress it - for some time - as it held it's own against the current, waiting ?, for it's one moment ( mating ) then gone to that graet river in the sky . Bill .
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Date: 3/16/2013 9:33:00 PM
That must have really been something! Thanks for reading.
Date: 3/16/2013 7:37:00 AM
Yes, it was a fantastic day, Donna - Thanks for shared it with me. - Good luck in the contest. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/16/2013 9:37:00 PM
Absolutely wonderful..thanks for reading anne lise
Date: 3/15/2013 11:08:00 PM
The beauty is so picture perfect! A beauty of a day... :o)
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Date: 3/16/2013 7:18:00 AM
It was a grand vacation...thanks for the kind words...Donna
Date: 3/15/2013 10:18:00 PM
DONNA....how picturesque! I LOVED it! You have just gathered the right words to take me there and give me a great taste of this adventure! BTW...I'm so glad you let it go free! That was the best part! :)
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Date: 3/16/2013 7:21:00 AM
Hi Eileen. Oh it is so beautiful there...and fly fishing is so fun..if you get the right clothes for it to stand the cold water. It was awesome......thanks for writing...
Date: 3/15/2013 10:17:00 PM
Beautiful! Good luck with the contest. I've always wanted to try fly fishing. As you say, it is so graceful and elegant. Jack
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Date: 3/16/2013 7:22:00 AM
Well you should go give it a try...most states have at least a seasonal place to do it..they only like cold water...thanks for writing...Donna
Date: 3/15/2013 6:39:00 PM
This is so very awesome and beautiful my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What an amazing piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 3/16/2013 7:23:00 AM
Thank you Russell....it was great! Donna

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