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One With Angels

He sat under a Bo tree. He meditated. He observed silence for days, seeking the Truth. Angels tried to feed him, but he resisted. Bit by bit he saw his inner flaws and doubts, and corrected them. Master of Darkness tried to shut his inner eyes, but was overwhelmed by the seeker's determination. Enlightened was the seeker, that he could see the past, present, and future. A halo encircled his head. Angels witnessed a mortal become one of them. He could see the sorrows they carried for the world, and their unconditional love for all mankind. The angels wept tears of joy in the heavens, in the place of a thousand suns....

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Date: 5/9/2016 1:16:00 PM
Excellent. This is great and awesome. A definite 7
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Date: 5/8/2016 2:09:00 AM
congrat on your win in the contest, I love this write a lot, well done
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/8/2016 4:27:00 AM
Hi BW. Thank you for your applause, and enjoying my piece!! *^_^* <3
Date: 5/7/2016 2:41:00 PM
A very beautiful, inspirational poem, Teddy. Congratulations on your fine placement in this Premiere Contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/8/2016 4:24:00 AM
Hi Sandra. Thank you so much for your applause. I really appreciate it! *^_^* <3
Date: 5/7/2016 9:47:00 AM
Hi Teddy, wonderful to see you on the winners list. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Teddy, an excellent work. I enjoyed this read from beginning to end. Well worthy of the win my friend. This is definitely a seven. Excellent....Mike.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/7/2016 10:42:00 AM
O, thank you so much Vlad, for praising my piece!! ;-) I really appreciate your visit and comment..
Date: 5/6/2016 10:33:00 PM
Teddy, congrats on your win in the contest. An amaking poem...:)-luloo
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/7/2016 10:38:00 AM
Thanks Laura, for your sweet applause and enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
Date: 5/6/2016 9:24:00 PM
Teddy, as I read this I thought it might be a short version of Siddhartha. The final two lines are a mantra for meditation. Thanks for entering the contest
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/7/2016 10:35:00 AM
Welcome John, and thanks for hosting this great contest. Indeed it is! ;-) The narrative of Siddharta's meditation when he was a Bodhi (Buddha-to-be) really inspired me upto now. Thanks for your applause!!! ;-)
Date: 5/3/2016 8:12:00 AM
Teddy, this is absolutely beautiful, outstanding and excellent, and I am loving it 7 ~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 5/4/2016 1:32:00 PM
Wow! Thank you so much BW! *^_^* <3

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