One Wish

if I had one wish... what would that wish be... that wish would be... for me.... to be me....

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Adell Foster

Date: 9/11/2008 7:49:00 AM

You have penned a very lovely wish indeed, hopefully your shall come true. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Daver Austin

Date: 9/11/2008 4:52:00 AM

Yes! Send this to the politician's in Washington. Love, Daver

James Foulk

Date: 9/9/2008 9:05:00 PM

well said if we all could just be ourself all the time. this was a great write. thank you for reading my poetry and for your comments

Sara Lokken

Date: 9/9/2008 8:39:00 PM

Wow, that is a wish of mine also, but it's hard sometimes in this world of ours---all the expectations, demands, the heartache. A beautiful wish I hope will come true for you. Love, Sara

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 9/9/2008 7:18:00 PM

That is one wish that you can make true this moment. Inspiring words...Love Kristin