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One Winter Morning

Wind passes at high velocity, snow flakes stick to a cold, frosty ground. Dressed from head to toe, I'm warm in my attire. Timberland boots, two sweaters (hooded to protect my head), with an Addidas skully cap. As I walk, the footsteps left behind vanish, covered by the newly fallen flakes. Above my head I notice the branches in passing, covered, colored powder white. I blink, my eyes take a printed snap shot into memory. A thin coat of black ice line the streets, slick, invisible to the human eye. I hear the sounds from struggling tires, looking to the left I see an SUV fishtailing, brakes failing, then slides into a guard rail. A stray dog walks slowly, crossing my path, shivering in this blistering cold. The dog stops at my feet, standing, trying to collect whatever heat leaves my body. My lips are chapped, fingers are numb, my feet feel like heavy ice cubes. to bad I had to walk outside this One cold Winter Morning .........:JP)...........

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Date: 8/27/2009 12:34:00 PM
Brrrrr, well written piece Jared>>James
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Date: 7/21/2009 8:09:00 PM
wow! Jared! images you give us lucky readers are stunning!!! sounds like my world in Minnesota! you are very accurate! I have said many times, if your car breaks down midwinter in Minnesota on some back road and you are not prepared, you could perish!!!! and thanks for comments! I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR HAUNTING!!!!
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Date: 7/21/2009 7:51:00 PM
I was totally rapt with envy while reading the first verse, making a mental image in my own mind of the way footprints in the snow are covered as the traveler moves along. But I was not prepared for the terrible accident you were so unfortunate to witness. Even the stray dog seemed to look to you for comfort. Beautiful poetry, Jared! Love, Carolyn
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