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exactly how I see from my mortal coil 

When a person promotes abortion telling nothing but lies surely that in itself is a direct product of hate speech The cloak and dagger of pity reality has many masks behind a veil of masked deception hiding dark secrets, those afraid to be revealed transparency attacking honesty as having little value or purity When this awakening happens some poor souls are lost beyond saving trapped by the deceiver preaching untruths and misery Incapable of loving forgiveness instead they become a troublesome bully guilty condemning everything right in favour of what is wrong with society today The great depression has consumed many hearts unlawfully with warlike views it is here we see criminals attacking the virtues of life and death the very cornerstone of faith There is no middle ground to be examined in this subject at hand your either one way or the other, according to the Word of God I am a sinner forgive me my shortfalls because in the end we all wish to go to the promised land some things need to be said because the weeds of fascism is growing, smothering the innocent from speaking forthwith the state has formed a new church teaching children to be poor within spirit

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Date: 1/20/2020 4:04:00 AM
Liam, I have just read your well written piece. This is the first time I have taken the opportunity to do so. Without Christ as the Cornerstone, all would be lost. Thank you for such a well thought out rendering.
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Date: 1/12/2020 6:27:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Very Powerful n' true poem you've written ,my dearest friend Liam. Wow!Very beautifully penned!Awesome!:)I agree with you!We're living in very ungodly, evil,corrupted,sad times Liam!But with our Lord Jesus we can have Love Hope Light Salvation!So lets pray more for all, especially all the blind,lost,very evil souls of this world!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A fav !You have a beautiful heart!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle n' sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you n' your very dear family are OK in all, Liam.Remember that the Lords always with you!Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, n' please take very good care of yourself,okay, Liam!:) Please keep positive n’ very strong!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers!Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Curtis Moorman
Date: 1/20/2020 4:07:00 AM
Dorian, pardon this intrusion but, I read with great interest, your comments to Liam's great write. You warmed my heart with your comments and your strong evidence of faith in our Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ. Bless you for the faith you are not ashamed to openly share! Curtis Moorman

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