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One True Gift

Star of a thousand dreams your loyal servant kneels Brightly warm shining jewels Golden promises to protect Holding love precious beauty Light softly gleams a blessing from your beautiful soul Miracle of life burns A candlelight flickers With breathless fire inside whispering winds howl Each heartbeat skips Opening chambers door Blood of passion flows true Flowering petals Blossoming silk kiss Uniting under one banner Dancing to the tune of joy happiness our universal goal Eternal life embraces you Sweet loving rose forever in paradise

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/28/2015 4:55:00 PM

Splendid phrasing and outstanding imagery on every line... A superb piece my friend! Best wishes, Keith

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/17/2015 9:31:00 AM

Excellent glittering gem this poem is. 7 sure. Best wishes for becoming life time premium member of our P.S. Loved always my lovely friend,bl

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 12/17/2015 3:14:00 AM

beautiful poem Liam :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/15/2015 5:15:00 PM

Hi Liam! Wow! Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I truly enjoy it! A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting, enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful n' sweet !So wonderful!Just amazing!I love it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful! Excellent imagery!Outstanding.Just perfect!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Tim Smith

Date: 12/15/2015 2:17:00 PM

Very beautiful Liam

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/15/2015 1:27:00 PM

................ I forgot - - - - 7 + !!!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/15/2015 1:23:00 PM

- Love is a true gift, dear Liam! :) - Best wishes for a beautiful December evening ..... here is it frost / cold and clear skies with amazing stars ........... ..... and moonlight - hugs // Anne-Lise :)