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One True Friend

My friend I am glad to see you talking to someone helps so much I didn't know what else to do so comforting is your touch No one else understands me quite like you my existence fading ,I can't go on not knowing what shall prove true as I live this con All this pain is just too great it must stop this day So many seem so full of hate why must it be this way The bottle and you are all I need the bottle gives me strength upon your words I feed Are you sure this is the action I must take you're right I must be strong for me will any hearts break and why do I feel so wrong unbending in your words I am now fully convinced with none of my pleas heard I have spoken with no one since Tears now, they should not weep my soul is wonderfully lifted for eternity I will sleep I truly am so gifted I am grateful for you my cold steel friend pulling your trigger and welcoming the end.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/22/2015 10:20:00 AM
oh this gave me goosebumps,at the end I was in a shock.
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Warren Stafford
Date: 9/28/2015 10:04:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to comment. It was a really dark time in my life Happy to say I'm no longer there
Date: 9/22/2015 9:49:00 AM
Oh, my goodness - I hope this creative rhyme is pure fiction! A creative tragedy ... CayCay (1st line, 2nd stanza, you want quite, not quiet)
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