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One Summer Evening

. We sat and held hands on the mossy river bank watching reflection as a rippled day declined Then lay back and looked for stars

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Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/14/2010 5:30:00 PM

Dear Carrie, how lucky was the person who had that nice moment with you just holding hands and looking at the stars! Lucky guys I presume :) Congrats on your win.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 9/14/2010 8:38:00 AM

I just loved how you ended this wonderful tanka, Carrie :) Made me all smiley ^_^-- super congrats on your win :)-- nikko :)

Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/2/2010 2:30:00 PM

This is lovely! It's almost like it's happening as we speak. Very nice! Congratulations on getting a placement in the contest!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/30/2010 5:39:00 PM

Indeed, a wonderful memory, Carrie. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest tanka contest! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/30/2010 5:22:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest, Carrie

James Fraser

Date: 8/30/2010 3:34:00 PM

Wow, what a lovely day your words have described Carrie. I think all couples should enjoy a day like your words tell. Many congrats on your fine win >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2010 4:48:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie on your win in Rick Parise's contest "A Memory Of Beauty". Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/29/2010 8:41:00 PM

What a lovely memory. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2010 7:28:00 PM

Lovely one, Carrie and congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/29/2010 6:42:00 PM

Congrats Carrie on your big win in Rick's Tanka contest... awesome as always... enjoyed with luv..

Sekitto Kisakye

Date: 7/25/2009 6:08:00 AM

nice to read and flows well. but it has a hiden meaning

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 6/23/2009 9:54:00 PM

Very nice and lovely Tanka. TY for your war comment on my poetry. Ernilando

Jim Fish

Date: 6/23/2009 6:13:00 PM

WOW! You are incredible. Maybe its just that we are passionate about the same things. I've got my eye on you... on my favorite poets' list anyway. ~<><