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One Snowflake

One snowflake lands on my tongue. It melts and I taste my childhood.

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/17/2011 4:53:00 PM

What a lovely image, Cherie. Trying hard now to remember the taste of snowflakes. Childhood was so long ago and there's very little snow in Florida where I now life. Enjoyed your poem, dear. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/15/2011 6:33:00 AM

Very expressive work..Good memory..Great idea for a work..Thanks for stopping by ...Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/14/2011 5:41:00 PM

Very thoughtful with deep meanings, Chedrie

Date: 5/11/2011 7:45:00 AM

Very nice, a lot of thought into this poem. Awesome.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/11/2011 6:15:00 AM

Super imagery Cherie.. where have u been lately? hope all is well and u enjoyed your Mother's day luv.. this piece is exquisite to imagine childhood in a snowflake..makes me think of my own luv..impressive..