One Red Leaf

One red leaf on stone As the babbling brook moves Onward to the sea

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/1/2009 4:55:00 PM

As always a wonderful read, Nicely penned as usual...Thanks Sara....RdP

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/30/2009 5:27:00 PM

Dear Sara, Great Haiku, and the red leaf stays there until it is nothing but red dust Blowing in the wind Superb Write Keep em coming ALWAYS YOURS...HG

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/28/2009 12:54:00 PM

So much in few words, haikus are in a class of their own and this one is a credit to them. Thank you for your comments on my "Growing Pains". Love, Joyce

John Freeman

Date: 11/28/2009 9:55:00 AM

Sorta like the corner stone, that the builders rejected, and neglected to build from, as life move on. There are natural land marks that are left to guide us home. Like gateways into the living stream, a marker of sorts. Everyone is invited to enter at some point in their life. Looks like you've been buisy Sara over the holidays, I have some reading to do. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Brian Strand

Date: 11/28/2009 8:19:00 AM

One of your best Sara.A Yorkshire pudding is an egg batter,cooked in a hot oven in small (like a cupcake)cake tins,we in our part of England have it with a roast meal.Rgds Brian

Jared Pickett

Date: 11/28/2009 8:14:00 AM

Very descriptive, in so little.... Good write Sara......:JP]

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/28/2009 6:40:00 AM

May beautiful images here Sara .. as the many red leaves I have on my front porch on this windy day in N.J.... great haiku .. thankxxx for sharing.. blessings .. luv.. Linda-Marie, "Sweetheart"

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/28/2009 6:02:00 AM

brings me to the creeks of Northern Minnesota that feed into Lake Superior! cool! jimbo (and thanks, always, for your welcome comments! Sara!)

Prince Freakasso

Date: 11/28/2009 5:18:00 AM

Lovely Haiku this Sara.Yes the river moves on in life,but sometings get left behind.Thanks for your quick draw comment.You had Billy The Kid beat there.God Bless,PRINCE.