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One of These Days

One of these days, when time is free And I feel the urge come over me I'll do the things I've always said I'd do before I end up dead Go places that I'd like to see I'll shed conventionality Live life as it was meant to be Not fantasize, but act instead One of these days Pleasure will be my decree I'll redefine normality Adventure will lay just ahead I'll do it all, just like I said One of these days

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/15/2020 11:05:00 AM
Nicely done, the meter flows smoothly and mixes hope and vision with knowledge of time passing. I enjoyed it and reread it several times before posting. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 7/26/2012 9:22:00 AM
Great work..The repeat line just flows..Enjoyed reading this morn..Do it today..Step out and do one thing different..Sara
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/26/2012 2:12:00 PM
Dust off the old bucket list.
Date: 7/24/2012 3:34:00 PM
lol...oooo...I like this a lot Bob!! Well done and winning wishes for you...love, deb
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/24/2012 5:33:00 PM
Thanks Deb
Date: 7/24/2012 10:26:00 AM
Live life today, do not wait until tomorrow Bob. - Very well written, like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/24/2012 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise. You are right
Date: 7/24/2012 9:51:00 AM
Very nice poem Bob.enjoyed the read.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/24/2012 10:05:00 AM
Thanks kash
Date: 7/24/2012 9:20:00 AM
Great write, Bob! Just don't wait too long. Love,KIm
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Bob Quigley
Date: 7/24/2012 10:05:00 AM
I won't. I'll get to it one of these days

Book: Shattered Sighs