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One of a Kind

What do I do, what should I say Nothing ever seems to go as planned Pools overflow from these salty drops I still need our love. can't you understand I let it slip away, trying to be brave Not showing I cared, I just let her go Her beauty frozen in the depths my mind So much passion our words were our link It was always we, how can it only be me I can't breathe, I can't talk, I can't think I won't be sitting here patiently waiting My love for you, everyone will know Those killer smiles upon your face The little giggles trying not to be shy Sparkles in your eye when I say your name The way you treated me, not like every guy Not sure really how to say this, but here I go You captured my heart, my soul, and my mind I wish you wouldn't go, I just want you stay Life with you is so much better, you're one of a kind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/11/2014 7:26:00 PM
Great write, straight from the heart.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/11/2014 8:17:00 PM
Thank you Maurice...I hear Jan is a pain in the arse.
Date: 11/11/2014 12:36:00 PM
Memories of past experiences will never die completely; this was a big loving experience and holds a very special place in your heart, Tim; but the way is ahead...face the horizon of fresh dreams. // paul
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/11/2014 8:16:00 PM
Thanks Paul....I agree the way is ahead...cheers Tim
Date: 11/11/2014 8:08:00 AM
a human experience that would make life good and worthwhile.. beautifully romantic, tim... huggs
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/11/2014 8:39:00 AM
Thanks nette ...hugs Tim
Date: 11/11/2014 4:02:00 AM
touching deeply tim i understand you in this bless you dear friend excellent pen
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/11/2014 4:46:00 AM
Thank you my good friend... Cheers
Date: 11/11/2014 1:12:00 AM
Sad but beautiful!Charma
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/11/2014 8:42:00 AM
No one ever wants sadness... Here's to a happy life and happier times....hugs
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/11/2014 6:15:00 AM
To face the sandness I meant
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/11/2014 6:13:00 AM
Happy moments make me strong to the sadness that makes me sad : )
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/11/2014 6:07:00 AM
Sadness makes me sad ..: )
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/11/2014 4:45:00 AM
Thank you Charma....sometimes sadness makes us stronger...hugs Tim
Date: 11/11/2014 1:02:00 AM
Tim, your poetry is really beautiful, emotions run deep in your pen. My blessings to you :) love and hugs eve
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/11/2014 4:44:00 AM
Thank you Eve ...hugs Tim
Date: 11/10/2014 6:59:00 PM
I agree with Casarah. All the little things you notice, it's remarkable.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/10/2014 10:16:00 PM
Thank you Brenda my friend.... Hugs Tim
Date: 11/10/2014 4:05:00 PM
Such a deep emotional yet tender write Tim - guess its so hard to let go of the past and move on:-( Hugs Jan xxx
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/10/2014 4:12:00 PM
You are right Jan...when you think you have the perfect girl and let her slip away it is devastating...hugs Tim
Date: 11/10/2014 3:56:00 PM
Oh it is so hard to loose someone. I love how you appreciate the little things, the eyes sparkle, the laughs, your heart is such a treasure, any where you are is where I'd like to be. Hugs xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/10/2014 4:16:00 PM
I said that to my ex Tim - but it was too late to mend broken promises and I couldn't go back and his mother didn't like me - I wasn't good enough for her mummy's boy of a son lol :-) Hugs jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/10/2014 4:01:00 PM
Thanks Cas...we never know what we really have until we lose it...hugs Tim

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