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One Morning

And one morning at breakfast with her we started an unbelievable dream, shining and swelling with a need to be intimate in this all too human world, seeking out that sun-like light, that tasty center, that knowing. And she knew the language of that dream, spoken only in tongues, whose long words of the heart washed down on me like the last words on earth, like rippling music, like gentle milk.

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Judy Konos

Date: 4/10/2013 5:32:00 AM

Jack Soup Mail instructions ...while reading a poem by a poet look at the poet's name click on the name then click on the coffee cup. After login Soup Mail comes up automtically. Type your message then click on the characters and validate. Give it a try. i cannot delete your poem and would not if I could because that's your decision...Just think of it this way.....Jack...You have something else to do on this Wednesday Morning...take care Judy

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/10/2013 8:37:00 AM

Thank for the instructions and consideration. I really appreciate them. Jack

Donna Jones

Date: 4/9/2013 10:22:00 PM

jack a lovely wanna be there sweet poem....Donna

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/9/2013 10:32:00 PM

I guess I want to be there too; the words came easily. Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/9/2013 10:12:00 PM

Hi Jack,,, oh no you did not have to remove the haiku. It was a small surprise. I'd seen the movie titled by the same title of your poem. IT was a powerful haiku, and made a good secret for the contest... I was not offended at all by it, but others might not take well to the white-hood and the tree image. To me it was just a poem, and a secret that could disturb folks around here. he he, I'm not sensitive OR am I ~wink wink... Immediately I knew it must had been a past family secret xox~PD

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/9/2013 10:18:00 PM

It was a secret from me for a very long time. However, I think it was right for me to delete it. I have also asked the sponsor of the contest to delete it. I'll have to rethink my collection of secrets, and try again. Thanks again for your observation. I really appreciate it. Jack

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/9/2013 8:26:00 PM

I love the poem Jack, and the ending is smooth... entangled in the best way...xox~ Linda

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/9/2013 9:47:00 PM

Thanks, Linda. I enjoyed visualizing them "talking" over breakfast. It must have been a revelation. Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/9/2013 9:49:00 AM

Very well written a lovely and sweet start to the day Jack - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan
Date: 4/9/2013 9:57:00 AM

Thanks you, and the same to you. Jack