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Love hurts, that is true I can't imagine my life without you They say when time flows it's like water Hold onto the chance, cos' it's now or never But just like water, holding you was impossible-- there's just no way I tried to hold onto you but you still slipped away In our love story anyone could see How fate is cruel for you and me Others say love is sweeter on the second time around But the heart and trust given to you once, you repeatedly broken down Is it just me or it's really getting out of hand Was it because our love sank like a quicksand Now that I moved forward You came back My heart you re-shattered Piece by piece it cracked Funny how I still question why were we ended hastily Your love, it lasted once, but we didn't end happily That night you left, it brought me sorrow Can't believe again you've made me cry Now, Our love, Tell me Does it deserve One More Try?

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Date: 3/10/2018 8:05:00 AM
Chase, a heartfelt write. Sometimes good things fall apart so that the right things can fall into place. They say if it's meant to be let her go, and she will return... Great poem! Welcome to the soup!!
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Date: 3/8/2018 6:45:00 AM
Great first post Chase, welcome to poetry soup..
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Date: 3/8/2018 7:54:00 AM
really? thank you :))

Book: Shattered Sighs