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One More Time

Give me one more time to prove my love to you, I want you to know it is true. Give me one more time to sacrifice my love and time, I have only you on my mind. Give me one more time before you shut the door and call out, you do not love me anymore. Give me one more time to show you that we can make it last, if only you learn to forgive and forget about the past.

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/7/2012 2:58:00 PM

Wow,,, I like this write ;} I wrote one like it a few yrs back , Have a great day ;}

Erich Goller

Date: 4/20/2012 9:22:00 PM

That's a lovely and heartfelt expressed poem,Thanks for sharing it,God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Chuck Novotny

Date: 4/1/2012 11:01:00 PM

This captures much of my current emotional state and expresses it so well. Always - Chuck

Stephen Allen

Date: 3/15/2012 1:49:00 PM

Shirley, another great poem. So heartfelt and yet still hopeful and written with such craft. Stephen.

Maxeen Dennis

Date: 2/2/2012 3:09:00 AM

Now, i can read your poetry all day!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/31/2012 7:04:00 AM

It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning Shirley. I hope that you might be able to find the time to read some of the other poetry here also. Love, Carol

Michele Ortiz

Date: 1/30/2012 2:40:00 PM

I feel this poem...I've been here.