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One Man's Pain

One man's pain... The clear blue sky, in anguish did cry As whips of lightening, on her back did crack Her face did darken, and contort with pain And pent-up tears, she did spew forth The sun-drenched earth, did empathize with her ally Yet, also did long for a cool watery snack Like diarheal stool, the heavens poured rain And the earth did drink, all her thirst's worth The earth, had the tropical sun baked dry Her tender skin, with many a crack Her friend's pain, did become her gain And the drought did end, in a nourished earth Many a time, we've all asked why? When we do think; life's a painful soundtrack But have failed to see, how each time our gain did reign Another's pain, may have been its true worth Apr. 1, 2017

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Date: 4/5/2017 5:47:00 PM
The theme is maintained throughout the poem and the imagery is good. The reader can relate to the message sent. Emile.
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Date: 4/18/2017 6:54:00 AM
Thank you Smile. Cheers, Sandison
Date: 4/2/2017 12:05:00 PM
Great! Tells me much about nature's beauty. Keep writing.
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Date: 4/3/2017 9:19:00 AM
Thank you victory, I will.

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