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"one Man Show"

When you look at me what do you see? For unto you my love is magnified. But at times I don't feel worthy, I stray away from your arms yet you still love me. Sometimes I wonder how you look at me. For unto your word I contravened. But in my heart with you is where I want to be, I know that I should have faith the size of a mustard seed. But does that mean i shouldn't strive for more? For the knowledge that i recieve from you makes my mind soar. Why do I ask what you see? Because you created me. There is nothing seen or done by me that you don't already know. So why am i acting like this a "one man show".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/17/2009 8:04:00 AM
Good morning Paul. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today. I truly enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2009 3:17:00 AM
This is very true and revealing...We tend to forget that God is the one that needs to be in charge of our life. Beautiful piece...
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Date: 8/17/2009 1:32:00 AM
aww a great poem, sometimes lifes' circumstances can take our minds of God for a split second, especialy in crisis it's our human instincts if a loved one is hurt or something we'd just go boming off to see they ok, But God loves us all the same , I too seek more of him a lot more i want to go so deep the enemy will never find me, God looks into our heart and he loves us, he sees what we will become, you are a treasure Paul he will always be by your side thanks for your kind comments God Blss
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Date: 8/17/2009 12:50:00 AM
Interesting work. Keep writing. Sara
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