One Love

I met you once long ago, fell for you, and our love did grow. Times we'll share, memories to make, the boundaries of love we'll strive to break. You might not see it but I sure do. The true perfection that lies in you. Your beauty is stunning. I'm lost for words. Your voice, the most beautiful I have ever heard. I'm yours to keep, we were meant to be. When I take out the ring, Will You Marry Me?

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/18/2014 9:14:00 PM

Hi Jose, I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! Great way to get it going with an excellent piece! Best wishes. Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/18/2014 1:58:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jose - I choose your first very well and sweet written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)