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One Little Poem

One little poem stood on the line Her little heart was pounding lub-dub, lub-dub She looked at the light in the far, with beaming excitement She stood behind the line wondering When her day will come, to shine Waiting for her chance Waiting for her fate Her little hands were trembling She looked at those machines and smiled It had taken The WHOLE to create this little beauty The prowess in her mind The wisdom in her heart The strength in her bones Her little feet trembling They were tempted to run, forcibly find herself with those in the front But she waited, trimming those edges, doing more last touches For her day was coming

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/27/2015 8:29:00 AM
patience pays but it takes a strength to hold on but in the end when we succeed we find it was worth it. a great piece Njeri.
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/31/2015 4:45:00 AM
Thank u Marion for your kind words. God bless you
Date: 8/27/2015 12:44:00 AM
A very pretty write. I love the lub dub line, made me smile. Jen was a nurse and I became familiar and affectionate to this term. I'm glad that this one's day is today. Kind regards, Ian
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 8/27/2015 1:34:00 AM
Thats so sweet:-) this poem was just for fun but you know me, if its written it has to be posted. Lol. I really need to head your way to read your poems. Thanks

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