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One Light

And to bathe these crystal eyes washing icicles of fear, miles of babel sentences turn into a different language... unknown and understood only by my spirit that finds loveliness in being not earthbound, but gliding along One Light reflecting the glitter of grasses inside my tree. Free. Again, at this moment, this nearness of God bestows a bead of peace I meet the sleep more than sleep could keep. Regina Riddle's God Contest

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/7/2014 1:41:00 PM

Woven like heavenly lace...I remembered why I missed your writing so much!! Ha ha, Professor Nette! You DID find me! Miss na miss kita!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/6/2014 10:22:00 PM

NETTE,, A wonderful, poem to read. Congrats, on your win.... LINDA

Craig Glenister

Date: 8/4/2014 11:13:00 PM

"I meet the sleep more than sleep could keep"..a wonderful insight into life.

Abdul Malik

Date: 8/1/2014 10:42:00 AM

Nice.

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/1/2014 8:03:00 AM

Beautiful write my friend. I expected no less from your pen.. Huge congrats on your win!!!!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/1/2014 4:56:00 AM

And back again with big congrats on lovely write nette !

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/1/2014 2:17:00 AM

Congratulations nette xx

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/1/2014 12:03:00 AM

Beautifully said, Nette. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/31/2014 3:02:00 PM

So incredibly beautiful, and soothing, dear Nette!!.. Gl in the contest!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 7/31/2014 11:10:00 AM

Lovely and wonderful piece,Nette...As heaven becomes my only friend"...Congrats on your superb win in this contest..

Leon Enriquez

Date: 7/31/2014 9:26:00 AM

Dear Nette: A lovely, spontaneous moment captured in your vivid lines. Well done. Enjoyed the synchronicity of feelings. Leon

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/31/2014 2:53:00 AM

The last line Nette what an explosion of calmness..:) congratulations.. Love too your use of terrain mirror..

Franco Gonza

Date: 7/31/2014 1:13:00 AM

Goodness, Nette! I could feel how you poured your heart and soul into this magnificent poem. And it speaks much of your spiritual essence. This humbles me!

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/30/2014 4:26:00 PM

This is truly beautiful my friend! You always impress me with your great wisdom and awesome use of the English language! It's nice to read you again, I will be gone again for another spell as school work has me out pulling my hair! But I will be back reading everyone's brilliant poetry and me contributing my works again! Thank you for your kind comments on my latest! I miss you all my friends! Great Work!!

Ct Duet

Date: 7/30/2014 2:21:00 PM

nette nette nette ...you never fail to impress me with you eloquence and beautiful imagery......hugs Tim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/30/2014 1:52:00 PM

Reads like winning material..Way to go for the contest..Enjoyed reading this one today.."Miles of babel sentences turn into a different language: unknown and understood only by my spirit"...Interesting line...Sara

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/30/2014 1:25:00 PM

I got massive goosebumps with the last line. Woosh! Mind boggling serenity in these lines. No real surprise there...

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/30/2014 12:59:00 PM

God's one n only light ,, into all and for all,, very sweet thoughtful write Nette! Gl in contest dear!

Jajosh Ongado

Date: 7/30/2014 12:17:00 PM

God's light is in each and every one of us. We must open ourselves to receive all that is good within ourselves and the world. Nette, a radiantly written poem with humility and grace. I am touched!