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One Last Gift

Return the happiness you have taken from me If you will not share it with me than it has no place within you. Return the happiness for my life has no meaning no beginning or ending without it. Return the happiness and try to remember how you once loved me and how sweet and sincere your words fell from your lips. Return the happiness for if you ever loved me even the slightest bit you will allow me this one final gift... ~This form is called: Anaphora~

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Date: 1/10/2011 4:53:00 PM
I really like this form though I never heard of it before. YOu did wonderfully with it! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/29/2010 1:07:00 PM
Reading this makes me sad but such a beautiful read of love.Thanks for your vry kind comment.Good luck in the contest.Teresa
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Date: 12/16/2010 4:35:00 PM
Good Luck if for Paula's new contest ...
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Date: 12/16/2010 4:34:00 PM
Intensely emotional piece Shar .. dramatic essence in this poem and I like the idea to ask for the happiness returned... wonder if they ever do? luv..enjoyed this entertaining piece my friend..
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Date: 12/16/2010 12:42:00 PM
You have penned positive appealing thoughts, with this new form Anaphora
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Date: 12/16/2010 12:25:00 PM
It's hard to "return the happiness" if you no longer love someone, Sharon. Perhaps by being a kind and supportive friend there is a way. A thought-provoking poem in a form I haven't seen before. I can feel the longing so deep in your words. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/16/2010 11:57:00 AM
thats all we ask. john h loving iii
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