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One Last Dance

Weeping willows on dead Swans' Lake Ballerina shoes too small, hanging on rusted nails I keep on waking up from giggled dancing lessons Mother still alive in the waiting room - proud... Shaking fingers crossed, holding my fans' bouquets My hair not gray, teasing life on pirouettes It started snowing glitter of way long childhood gone I scream a violent silence through a double paned sliding dream It's time - the time when clocks face me without hands - I shyly grab some "What if's" and remember to tie my shoe laces " Stand straight, chin up" - a stage light on a solo swan A last and gracious slide on an untangled musical key...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/2/2012 3:47:00 PM
simply fabulous
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Date: 1/24/2010 3:45:00 PM
Beautifully rendered musing on a happier time of innocence and grace. Quite moving, Iolanda, particularly the line about "Mother still alive in the waiting room - proud..." That is rich with significance. You now join my growing list of favorite poets. ..........Linda
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Date: 1/23/2010 10:29:00 AM
Very nice and reminiscent of a looking back. Beautiful imagery. Lightwalker
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Date: 1/20/2010 8:24:00 PM
That is very beautiful a write, with a nostalgic tone. Very well written, Iolanda! Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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Date: 1/20/2010 2:00:00 PM
This is beautiful...Are you a dancer? Love this!! Marty
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