One Kimo

twilight holds her artisan silhouette- delicate afterglow as constellations ascend October 8, 2016

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Casarah Nance

Date: 10/18/2016 5:06:00 PM

Beautifully said :) grats on your win

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/17/2016 10:31:00 PM

Great congrats Laura to win on your wonderful piece. Hugs

Mark Paul Van Der Merwe

Date: 10/17/2016 12:00:00 AM

I really am in awe of your writing Luloo - I can and will learn a lot from poets of your caliber. Congratulations on your placement Regards, Mark

John Lawless

Date: 10/16/2016 9:33:00 PM

Well done Laura, congrats.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/16/2016 7:24:00 PM

GOOD for you with a great win, Laura. Nice seeing this one again.

Janis Thompson

Date: 10/16/2016 6:44:00 PM

Sweet kimo luloo. Takes you out of this realm in feelings. Congratulations on your placement.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/16/2016 1:51:00 PM

I love this Kimo, Laura, and in my mind I can feel that delicate afterglow! Congratulations on this high placement:) Regards // paul

Lu Loo
Date: 10/16/2016 2:10:00 PM

thank you sweet Paul :)-luloo

Anu Nayak

Date: 10/16/2016 1:44:00 PM

Hearty congrats on your great win dear Luloo, lovely imagery , can visualise the twilight beauty,nicely penned kimo, enjoyed it!//love, Anu:)

Lu Loo
Date: 10/16/2016 2:10:00 PM

thank you sweet Anu :)-luloo

Rick Parise

Date: 10/16/2016 1:43:00 PM

Beautiful !!!! I love it!!! Congrats Talented One.........

Lu Loo
Date: 10/16/2016 2:09:00 PM

thank you Dear Rick for my placement! I am honored and grateful :)-luloo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/13/2016 11:12:00 PM

Beautiful!

Lu Loo
Date: 10/16/2016 2:09:00 PM

thank you sweet Kim :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2016 5:47:00 PM

I love this. It's such a cool form for poetry.

Lu Loo
Date: 10/16/2016 2:08:00 PM

thank you Andrea :)-luloo

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/9/2016 6:16:00 AM

love afterglow so uplifting...liked it Laura. Love.

Lu Loo
Date: 10/16/2016 2:08:00 PM

thank you Rajat :)-luloo

Paloma P

Date: 10/9/2016 4:09:00 AM

Another new form of poetry I was not familar with. Really lovely Kimo.

Lu Loo
Date: 10/16/2016 2:08:00 PM

thank you Pretty Paloma :)-luloo