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One Hundred Thirty-Six Pretty Petals

Inside twinkling eyes of nights bloom Garden flowers whisper Peeking through tree branches, heads nod Vines twine graceful arbor crown Rows covered with pretty petals Faces of sunflowers Dream of tomorrows honey bee Sleepy yawns of sweet peas Early morning darkness shrouds daisy Happy go lucky petals Spin cartwheels across the night sky Honeysuckle smiles grace fence Veil of mist twirling through hearth Maiden’s shy smile sleeping Exuberant gaze waiting brightly Bluebell colors swirl Dew drops dripping off Iris tongues Moon beams warm tulips Kiss of starlight rejoice each rose Pepper nasturtium petal Under Hostas' green leaf shelter Nestles dainty slippers Woven of heaven’s sweet scents Garlands adorn the sky Pirouette back down to earth And open the garden gate Dawn’s an hour’s chime away In mystical days of June BRIAN'S CHOICE X,any form,any theme Poetry Contest 2nd Place written August 23, 2019

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Date: 6/3/2020 8:53:00 PM
Wow Jeanne you really know about a flower garden, such exquisite detail you paint, glad this got a top win! Just beautiful!
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Date: 5/29/2020 9:22:00 AM
Lovely imagery and landscape, Jeanne:)
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Date: 5/28/2020 3:07:00 PM
Ah, such a wonderful image - poem and photography; I am wondering if they are both your creations.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 5/28/2020 3:32:00 PM
yes indeed they are! I am just getting my 2nd book of poetry and photography published with Lulu press...and that poem is in there. But I think with a different photo...I have so many,,flowers being one of the things I love to photograph.
Date: 5/27/2020 6:00:00 PM
What a beautiful scene you have created with your poetic talent. Thank you for sharing, Dear Jeanne. Sincerely, Elaine
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 5/28/2020 3:33:00 PM
Hi Elaine, one of my favorite places is Buchart gardens in Canada on Vancouver Island. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem.
Date: 5/27/2020 2:31:00 PM
an absolute joy to read Jeanne I love everything about it and the formatting is superb, I predict a high placement with Brian - into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/27/2020 12:13:00 PM
Love the animated personification by which you bring this gorgeous garden to life. Really impressively penned, Jeanne! A FAVE for me! Keep smiling, Gershon
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