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One For the Road

This evening hurts I've grown rusty quick wits groan as curtains hide footlight that makes its way to stage That voice - is it mine? - grumpy, in need of... what.... and the audience standing around stares confused... fake popcorn smiles in hot buttered nervousness Wish they would give me one to ease into fog make them all go away Wish I could play my violin so no one would hear my smoky rasp in the microphone I burn up concessions create wistful sunsets at the very break of day Fix me a strong one for tonight and one stronger for the morning

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/28/2018 4:47:00 PM
Wow! Feelings worn on the sleeve...a poet writes!
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Date: 10/26/2018 11:03:00 AM
What a performance! Bravo! Encore, poet! ~ Gershon
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Date: 10/26/2018 11:03:00 AM
What a performance! Bravo! Encore, poet! ~ Gershon
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Date: 10/12/2018 8:39:00 AM
This was really cool my friend. I especially liked the second stanza. You have outdone yourself here. This feels different from what I am used to from you and I like it a lot.
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Date: 10/2/2018 2:05:00 AM
Wow Darren, I hope the strong one is not for real. This is a beautiful write. I hope you are well. Best wishes, Kai
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Date: 9/29/2018 9:29:00 AM
Moody and wistful, I like it. Big hugs Sweet P. "That voice - is it mine? -" ...stirring dear poet. xomo
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Date: 9/29/2018 7:54:00 AM
I prefer the grumpy smokey feel...liked this Darren
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