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One Foot In the Bedroom One Foot Out the Door

One foot in the bedroom one foot out of the door seems relationships are too much hassle today and no one wants a loving relationship any more. You give your best your hopes built up and then shot down in flames emotions and feeling amount to nothing neither does your name. I don't want a disposable relationship I'm nones plaything or toy I'm me I have a heart brain and personality but no one wants that or me. So I remain disillusioned lost and alone, as ever. Peter Some.copyright. 2013. Dec.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/22/2013 7:15:00 AM

- Well written ..... but sad,Peter !!! :( - I wish you and your loved ones an enjoyable Christmas - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome
Date: 12/22/2013 7:19:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne Lise but I have no one.Best wishes to you.take care Pete/

Peter Dome
Date: 12/22/2013 7:16:00 AM

Thank you Linda. not sure about two to ruin a relationship. never get to that stage,I'm not a piece of meat for anyone..I need more for keeps, take care. best wishes Pete..

Linda Jackson

Date: 12/22/2013 6:49:00 AM

A sad poem about doomed relationships. Well written. We are only human, Peter, so it takes two to ruin a romance. Best wishes Linda x

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/21/2013 3:27:00 PM

deep and sad too Peter truth as well powerful pen Shadow x smile hug

Peter Dome
Date: 12/21/2013 4:32:00 PM

Thank you dear Lady. Call me an old fashioned a cursed romantic, doesn't seem to count much these days. Take good care. warm best wishes. Pete.