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I write with heavy heart my words laden down with pain broken heart healing so slowly takes time maybe soon hurt goes smile again good times remembered ... memories penned 21 May 2019

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Date: 1/24/2023 1:44:00 PM
Seren, Hurt can feel so hopeless until I take your hand. Just a friend's intent.. nothing more. But I could make your green sparkle again. Your smile could save the world!
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Date: 11/11/2019 6:55:00 PM
I had contacted you to the email I had. My email is waylandbunch@gmail.com. don't know if I have your current email.
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Date: 10/20/2019 2:47:00 AM
Hello I hope you're doing ok. I'm trying to reach you if possible. This poem is sad like some of mine but also with an element of hope like some of mine as well.
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Date: 10/6/2019 10:42:00 PM
You can take part of my heart...I have plenty of love to go around...great to read you Seren Justim
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Date: 7/10/2019 6:45:00 PM
Hello Seren Roberts, it takes time to heal.You will heal and begin again. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 6/9/2019 2:48:00 PM
I pray you heal xo
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Date: 5/28/2019 5:38:00 PM
A great write, Seren; and positive wisdom.
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Date: 5/26/2019 9:56:00 PM
Nicely done, Seren, you can feel the pain in the verse. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/25/2019 8:24:00 PM
A wonderful write, Seren. Congrats on your win. ~Charlie
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Date: 5/25/2019 1:38:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great suggestions, Seren ... a fun contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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