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One Christmas Wish

Its still a happy time of year.. Although some gone cause a tear.. I remember Christmas as a child.. Now these Holidays are a bit mild.. The tree still has its array of lights.. And out my window the chill takes a bite.. If I could have one Christmas wish to send.. I would balloon up to heaven in a teardrop to be with all you again... Merry Christmas Dad, Dianna and Al...Miss you

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Date: 12/24/2010 7:41:00 AM
A nice dedication to all,,, enjoyed sweet thought and sentimental,,, have yourself a wonderful x-mass and the best new year God bless,..p.d.
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Date: 12/22/2010 2:14:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today.. looking forward to reading more... Dana'lynn
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Date: 12/20/2010 12:24:00 PM
Happy Holidays to you. The poem made me want to see the visions of Christmas, as you remember as a child. And hear the sound of talking and laughter.
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Date: 12/20/2010 8:50:00 AM
Well say it isn't so but it is .. and we must go on.. talk on ESPN Coughlin might be gone if they lose last two games... oh no... and it was horrendous to watch over and over again... but... there is still hope... believe in the GMEN.. luv.. Jersey Girl still does and congrats to Jets and your lady fair..my W.K...with luv..
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Date: 12/19/2010 7:23:00 PM
What a wonderful line: balloon up to heaven in a teardrop. An unselfish and heartfelt wish, Michael!!
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Date: 12/19/2010 12:30:00 PM
A lovely write on remembrance of loved ones who are no longer with you on earth but are watching over you always.. Blessings to you Wilma
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Date: 12/19/2010 10:33:00 AM
Lovely inspirational write Michael my White Knight... and hope my "A Christmas Chime" gave u food for thought to pen this luv.. a great piece to offer and a wonderful wish too.. hope Santa makes all your wishes come true ... with luve and admiration always and forever.. Jersey Girl .. bobbing up and down during the Giants/Eagles game right now.. luv..
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Date: 12/19/2010 10:10:00 AM
thanks for the mention...and if you get a chance please read my new one...its about my youth pastor...i would love your take...thanks.....lizzy.b
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Date: 12/19/2010 9:43:00 AM
Michael, a lump formed in my throat reading this. Fabulous, I enjoyed! Thanks for your comments on Winter haiku -- very appreciated! Carol
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Date: 12/19/2010 9:41:00 AM
Christmas brings up so many emotions. I would give anything to sit in front of the fire on xmas morning with my folks..hear my Dad laugh. Thank you for this poem..it brought back memories. BG
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Date: 12/19/2010 9:37:00 AM
such nostalgic mood that affects my senses dearly, michael... sensational write! .. nette
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