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One Broken Monoku

seeds inclusive gift blue jays among the sparrows John G. Lawless 11/28/2014

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2014 4:37:00 PM

Way to go with this great winning Monoku..Congrats..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2014 8:51:00 AM

John, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... interesting Broken Monoku.... Have a sweet day ~LINDA~

David Mohn

Date: 12/27/2014 11:22:00 PM

love this one John...big congrats

John Lawless
Date: 12/28/2014 8:22:00 AM

Thank you David.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2014 9:10:00 PM

STill find this to be OUTSTANDING. You used birds too!!! Congrats.

John Lawless
Date: 12/28/2014 8:22:00 AM

Thanks for you kind comment Andrea.

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/27/2014 9:03:00 PM

Congrats on the win John...huggs

John Lawless
Date: 12/28/2014 8:20:00 AM

Thank you for reading and stopping by to comment

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/27/2014 7:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your nice win, John. Nice one! Sandra

John Lawless
Date: 12/28/2014 8:19:00 AM

Thank you Sandra

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/27/2014 6:42:00 PM

Congratulations John on your well deserved first win.

John Lawless
Date: 12/28/2014 8:19:00 AM

Thanks Maurice. My only question is "Who broke the Monoku and didn't clean up the mess?"

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/27/2014 3:32:00 PM

congratulations on this win John

John Lawless
Date: 12/28/2014 8:17:00 AM

Thank you Robert.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2014 12:10:00 PM

this is wonderful. I did one on birds too.

John Lawless
Date: 12/28/2014 8:17:00 AM

YEAH, and they both landed on the same branch....Thanks Andrea for your continued input and inspiration.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2014 4:39:00 PM

beautifully penned - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan x

John Lawless
Date: 12/28/2014 8:16:00 AM

Jan, I'm a bit late replying..sorry....thanks for your support.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/28/2014 7:54:00 PM

Well done John. Good luck in the contest.

John Lawless
Date: 12/28/2014 8:14:00 AM

Thanks Brenda for your early comment, sorry for my late reply I've been dancing with my new grand daughter since Thanksgiving day.