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One Brief Moment

In one brief moment you saw me as I am without a word spoken palm open for my hand. Nary a harp string plucked silence graced the air silhouettes became one my heart I laid bare. Candle wicks were unlit full moon a distant past my emerald eyes glowed your love echoing back. Fire our skin to skin heat scent unique unto us not a flower in bloom our souls we gave in trust. In one brief moment you saw me as I am the memory of each breath my bliss I'll always have. 03-28-2017

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James Inman

Date: 8/21/2019 7:27:00 AM

It is a difficult thing to share with someone who you really are, and it is a lucky and hopefully very grateful person who gets to share this moment with you.

Derek Noble Ayi

Date: 10/14/2017 5:46:00 AM

Nice piece. You have done well. Keep it up.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/22/2017 3:22:00 PM

This poem still sounds as fresh and beautiful as when I first read it, Lynn...a pleasure to be reading it again! Warm regards // paul

Alex Anonymous

Date: 9/1/2017 8:44:00 AM

Wow Lynn, that was just breathtaking. I love this poem. :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 5/14/2017 2:12:00 PM

Hi Lynn, love sings as your words flow down the page. Your "One Brief Moment" can shine for an eternity as one does read your words, as they softly enter the heart, stirring the emotions. The words that dreams are made of Lynn. In "One Brief Moment" you have touched the heart and soul. This one has to be a seven and a fave Lynn.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/29/2017 2:25:00 PM

Hello Lynn, a 7 Nice to meet you.

Anil Deo

Date: 4/21/2017 10:25:00 AM

sevens. (I was tempted to use more numbers). Congrats for touching so many with this excellent write. Anil Deo

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/17/2017 11:29:00 AM

Well said. Thank you for stopping by my writes, I'm not on her as often as I used to be, you made my day with your comments. You write beautifully I'm going to read a few while I am on ;)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/10/2017 11:10:00 AM

Dear Lynn. Good Afternoon. This is gorgeous poetry and expression. Each line is smooth and flowing. The theme of love is timeless. The one brief moment can last a lifetime to keep one warm through life. Excellent poetry. Well done throughout.

Darren White

Date: 4/9/2017 3:50:00 AM

I LOVE beautiful love poems, and this is one Lynn. I always hope that once my loved one will see me in real life, he will REALLY see me, not just the outside me, but the whole of me. You worded that so well.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/9/2017 12:46:00 AM

A gorgeous piece, you made my heart flutter.

Doug Vinson

Date: 4/6/2017 3:38:00 PM

Wow, Lynn, you really hit the spot here. A special, scary, necessary truth about part of what it is to be human. I wish everybody had the moment as you describe.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 4/5/2017 9:46:00 AM

I just ran on to this beautiful poem. I would hope that "One brief moment," would be indelible.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/1/2017 10:22:00 PM

Thank you for sharing this beautiful moment expressed with such passion. Ribbons of love flowing in the wind....7 ; )

Chris Hagy

Date: 3/31/2017 3:48:00 PM

Such a lovely and elegant piece Lynn!...such treasures in some brief moments! Aahh sweet memories you bring to my mind:)

John Hamilton

Date: 3/30/2017 9:55:00 PM

Very beautiful writing of fond memories, soo good! a7

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/30/2017 10:54:00 AM

Your work confronts life and love in its totality and comes up a winner, supplying beauty and a subtle wisdom that is gently distributed throughout. Emile. #7

Paul Callus

Date: 3/30/2017 8:58:00 AM

This is one unforgettable moment in time, Lynn...beautiful and romantic! Who needs words when the chemistry is so magical!! #7 ~ Regards // paul

Becca Teagan

Date: 3/30/2017 1:48:00 AM

Lynn, this is so beautiful and romantic! I think you express your feelings very well. Thank you for visiting me today, I really appreciated your sweet comment, and I'll enjoy reading more of your poems.