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One Brick At a Time

You patiently take down one brick at a time From this wall I live behind You show me how much you care And that you always will be here I closed my heart afraid of pain Don't ever want to feel that again Slowly you open the door that is locked so tight Reassuring me every thing will be alright Helping me let go of this fear of mine Showing a heart so true and kind -C.A.Saputo xoxo

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Date: 5/14/2016 8:24:00 PM
Christine, good use of rhyme and rhythm within your poem. Also your application of vivid imagery is a delight to read. Thank you for sharing. ~ Sonia
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Christine Saputo
Date: 5/18/2016 4:51:00 PM
Thank you so much. So glad you enjoyed reading my poem! :)

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