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One Breath of Liberation

She was crouched semi collapsed no one could touch her a fire of dignity would raise from her feet to lift the line of her chin determination etches new lines worry brought the sweat pig headed pain corrugating furrows soldiering on striking and slashing at every obstacle till time had no mind for her pride and the spectre that dogged every fall every twitch each scrap of scoundrel death then her eyes fired when her body could not her spirit never diminished even as she jumped up to brush poppies in heaven radiant inscrutability she was ready for the next campaign and leapt —- dignity made wings that now, soar the stars in one breath liberation

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Date: 12/11/2009 8:32:00 AM
The voice of womanhood mature, the roaring of the lioness, the human at door, the poet may call thee friend ... and friend forevermore ... this is an awesome write
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Date: 12/10/2009 10:56:00 AM
I agree with John, Jayne > it is an awesome write >> James
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Date: 12/9/2009 10:50:00 AM
Awesome "One breath Liberation" that's all it took for the source to blow soul into us, and I am sure one breath is sufficient to liberate. Smile! Par comment, no I've never read"Jenkins". Panche, who or what are you referring to? Thanks so much for your gracious comments. Sincerely, Love Moses
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