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One Blood Forever

Love litters sea shore As dimmed eyes drip promises In endearment's pour Dreams bind together In words stronger than oaths One blood forever [Double haiku] For Poet Destroyer's contest:” Going Haiku Crazy"

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Joe Maverick

Date: 6/10/2011 2:53:00 PM

Good to read this uniqe write Joseph, congrats on the placement win here...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/9/2011 9:23:00 AM

Accept my congratulations on this win in the contest of p0.d., Joseph

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/9/2011 7:26:00 AM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's "Haiku~Crazy" contest Joseph. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/9/2011 1:56:00 AM

joseph. well deserving of the award! grrreat stuff... : ) huggs

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/8/2011 11:20:00 PM

beautiful haiku you have here, Joseph-- enjoyed this one-- congrats on your win :D

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/8/2011 8:49:00 PM

Congrats Joseph on your super duper win in the Haiku contest luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2011 8:40:00 PM

Awesome, Joseph. Congrats on the winners' list.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/7/2011 4:27:00 AM

Such a romantic and spiritual write. I can envision a seashore busy with the litter of a relationship... A nice ending too...dreams ARE stronger than oaths...one spirit...one mind. Awesome. Gwendolen

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/6/2011 6:25:00 PM

Wonderful entry with these double haiku, good luck, Joseph